Hello, my name is vivianne, and my first essay assignment skill, which is about Comparing and Contrasting. Me, and my calssmates decided to attend one of the summer camps, which are "Camp Big Apple", "Ranch West Camp", and "Head start Splash". So, to make a good choice, I will compare and contrast these three camps.
First of all, environment where students study is very important to me. Camp Big Aple's environment can give us a good chance to have talk with many foreigners. But living in dormitary may bring some fights between friends. On the other hand, Ranch West Camp do home-stay, which provides good experiments with foreigner and there won't e so many fights, since it is family.
Secondly, Ranch West Camp gives freedom to students to chose what they want to learn about. Contrasted to this, Camp Big Apple teaches "SAT", which is so early to elementary school students and middle students. The worst part is "Head Start Splash", not teaching many kinds of subjects or not even clear.
Finally, Ranch West Camp has foriegn teachers, which can influence students to have good accents. In contrast, Camp Big Apple, use Korean professors who can have weak point in accent part. But still, they may teach well because of some high quiality of studying.
As a result of comparing and contrasting each other's advantages and disadvantages, I chose "Ranch West Camp" because we can study in a proper environment which is Canada, have freedom to choose what to study and can home-stay, which can make many different kinds of situations!
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